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clocean 用原生笔记试了下改写，也和 GPT 4o 对比了下：
Orignial Article:
My English friend name is jim.
He is ten, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.he has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.
I and jim has become the good friend .several days later jim said that he wanted, he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .ok see you jim.see you.
By Apple intelligence
My English friend, Jim, is ten years old. His family resides in London, and he and his family members recently visited China to play. Jim has a cousin named Qianyu, who is four years old and has many questions. He is pointing at the chopsticks to ask, “Is this anything?”
Jim and I have become close friends. Several days later, Jim expressed his desire to visit London. He said, “I love China. I will forget about you, Zhou Lei. I will have free time to look at you.”
I look forward to seeing Jim again.
By GPT 4O
My English friend’s name is Jim. He is ten years old, and his family lives in London. Recently, he and his family came to China for a visit. Jim has a cousin named Qianyu, who is only four years old. Qianyu is very curious and asks many questions. Look! He’s pointing at the chopsticks and asking, “What is this?”
Jim and I have become good friends. After spending several days together, Jim told me that he loves China and doesn’t want to forget me. “Zhou Lei, you should visit me in London when you have free time,” he said.
“Okay, see you, Jim. Take care!”
另外目前模型还是在云上而不是在本地，断网就不能用了