shiji
2016-04-10 08:10:52 +08:00
小错误,
1.第一行,这是简历,找什么工作不用写,如果可能的话那个也许写在 cover letter 上
2.上过的课,名称大小写要一致,一会儿大写一会儿小写影响印象。
3. President List 和 Dean List 貌似都忘加's 了,应该是 Dean's List 这样的,再一个 上了 President List 自然已经是 Dean's List 了,都写可能会重复。
4. 无序列表成员之间的关系应该是平行的,你做过的项目简介不要和项目名称呈并行关系。
5. Familiar 这个词比较虚,读者可能还是不清楚到底了解多少
6. 项目和经历要深入展开写,你写的过于简单。这是我在网上扣的一段:
Experience
Object-Oriented Programmer 9/1/2005 - Present
Kingston Inc.Fulton, IN
* Use OOP to develop network communications between departments within the building
* Develop online applications using OOP as well as Python programming
* Program systems with both data and code giving ability to senders and receivers
* Retrieve and modify data within the system
* Research and implement any updates or new software that is available