v 友们好，我有一份英文简历想麻烦大家给点建议

[lalawu]

大家好，这是我第一份英文简历。说起来也惭愧，工作 5 年了居然第一次尝试完善自己的第一份英文简历。
想用这份简历投一个很青睐的公司，目标职位是高级后端开发工程师。
不想简历被 hr 标记为不通过，想麻烦朋友们帮我看看这份简历还有什么完善的空间，或者是是不是已经达到可以被大部分 hr 接受的程度;
简历在这里： https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_etwN2e9H9u7Gyv1cKHo9CX1lqig09uHgRUIRWO0Uv4/edit?usp=sharing

[zfz]

这篇文章很有帮助 《 Learning How to Write a Killer Résumé — By Example 》： https://www.freecodecamp.org/news/writing-a-killer-software-engineering-resume-b11c91ef699d/

[GavinY]

@lalawu I added some comments, basically, it lacks some outstanding outcomes in your resume, I do believe you have it, just need some time to summarise it, hope it's helpful, have fun.

[lalawu]

@GavinY I saw your suggestions, they are really helpful. I do need to summarize my growth and achievements.
Good day 🌹.